Comments on Statement of Intent:
Sarah Mark: 4 Grade: D Comments on Statement of Intent: · The concept works – I particularly like the way you are planning an extended scene at the beginning of the trailer to create personal identity and an emotional connection between the audience and your main character. However, as a statement of intent you are lacking a few key aspects and need to redraft in certain areas. · Written English is a definite area to improve – grammar/sentence structure incorrect in places. · You may want to make the beginning easier to follow – title, tagline, genre etc. Does the title need rethinking a little? · Far more media terminology is required – look at the brief (minimum requirements) and then outline specific aspects you will create in your cross-media production that meets these requirements. E.g. you offer some quite comprehensive narrative for the storyline but no specific shots, sounds, aspects of mise-en-scene etc. to show how