Cinematography feedback and learner response
Cinematography feedback and learner response
Mr Halsey
- The opening feels more like a slideshow than a film. I
know the video kicks in later but something to consider in future. You will
need to produce professional level video work for coursework later in the year!
- The camerawork is generally excellent: steady,
well-shot and in focus. I also like the font you've used - it's modern and
professional.
- Revise tracking shot: a tracking shot can't be going
down stairs (it's on wheels!) That shot would be handheld. Also, what is an
action shot? I think you may actually be showing an editing term -
match-on-action. We'll be covering this later in the year but great if you're
learning it already!
Reflection:
WWW: Camera work was done well.
EBI: Make the video more into a film.
I think overall the editing could have been better. I need to focus more on tracking shot because it was done wrong. Furthermore, need to focus on the close ups and make it more into a video because it looked like a slide show.
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