Learner Response
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full. --> - Good use of horror conventions! The music works well, the editing is well-paced in building tension and the little cuts to the blurry white-screen effect work very well. I think you've got a good performance out of your actor too. - The mise-en-scene is mixed. The school desk and the drama studio are pretty easy to identify and it's not clear why it's in that location. The result is that it looks like a school production rather than a professional horror film. Ultimately, we are trying to reach professional standards with the film trailer so that's something to reflect on for the real production. - The key weakness though is that you haven't met the brief. You needed to include at least two characters, match-on-action, shot-reverse-shot, a range of camera shots and dialogue/voiceover. You have not included any of these 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and your te...